Is it those lies that are killing you
Or is it the truth pulling finally through
Can´t you see who you are
Lies can kill but so can truth
If you hide it too long
Revenge will be bittersweet
You´ve been big lie too long
When it disappears will be there anything?
Can you see what is real, this is ending now
What´s it that hurts you most
Is it the words or
Is it what you do
You deny yourself
And still tell me it´s you
"Can you see what is real, this is ending now"
ReplyDeleteYou really know how to make amazing lines :P
"You deny yourself
And still tell me it´s you"
This makes me wanna know what the poem's really about... :P Which, in my opinion, is a good thing. If the poems raises questions it often means the poem's exceptionally well written xP (and I think it is)
I don´t know how to make "amazing lines", they just come :P there´s absolutely no secret.
ReplyDeletewell to be honest I don´t know (as usual) where this came from. basically that means that I can´t even tell you what is this about :P does it sound stupid? yes it does XD I think I should know my poem better :P
xD I don't think it sounds stupid, I've written poems with no story behind them as well... :P
ReplyDelete"You deny yourself
ReplyDeleteAnd still tell me it´s you"
You are so my favorite poet.
Maybe you're like me, Rocco. I can sometimes not tell what a piece is about until after I wrote it. It just appears. :D
you said it perfectly: It just appears :P
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