New shoes and letter mittens
That´s what I noticed when we met
You looked away and didn´t want to see me
Did you see my hair is shorter than it used to be
Did you notice my eyes are tired
Did you see that I still have your old luminous badge
Hanging in my coat
Defending me from the dark
I opened my mouth to say hello
But only bit my lips and went on
More pain in my heart
This isn't a poem full of nothing, that I can say. There's obviously more history to it than what meets the eye. However, this is in a way a simple one, and simplicity is beautiful. xD
ReplyDeleteI have to agree... you write very fluently and it never sounds too simple anyway. This is brilliance really. Your stuff always reminds me of me :S
ReplyDeleteFR, you´re rigth. there´s lot of personal stuff behind it.. I´ve been a bit hurt because of this guy and now I don´t speak to him that much. I´d say that "killing silence" is also about this stuff. maybe I just have to get over it. I don´t want to ruin our friendship anyway.
ReplyDeletesipmlicity.. I can agree with that. but you just have to see behind it... :P