Under sky, painted grey
Suffuses loneliness
Rains frozen water
It hacks me down
I´d scream but here wouldn´t be anyone to be found
Harrowing wind has taken even ghosts
You can hear only echos
It´s useless to weave life between
I can feel how houses collapse under their weight
I wonder when will scawengers arrive
To destroy what never was too strong
Thousand stories, taken to the grave
Don´t you feel how misfortune is still with us
In the land of deserted houses
Only madness stays
Mysterious and well written, gotta say :P
ReplyDelete"In the land of deserted houses
Only madness stays" good lines ^^
"I´d scream but here wouldn´t be no one to be found" does that mean there IS someone to be found or is there a grammatical mistake in the line? *confused*
btw I was wondering... is your email not working or why haven't you replied anything..?
well seems like I´ve done a mistake there :D OMG... haha. I´ll change that. thank you, you can always tell me if I have done a mistake. I´m not perfect, you see ;)
ReplyDeleteo.O I´ll answer you right away! if you wrote to roccaripoetry@luukku.com, I haven´t checked it so... forgive me! ^^
"Under sky, painted grey
ReplyDeleteSuffuses loneliness
Rains frozen water"
That's fucking epic :o
lol :D the lord of the rings is nothing compared to me :P thank you ^^
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