Why do you have to hide your tears
How could they hurt anyone except yourself
It´s useless to conceal them
Tracks on your cheeks blaze, burned by salty water
And everyone can see your depressed eyes
You don´t spend your nights laughing
Why should you hide something
When everyone can see it anyway
Your pain won´t disappear, no matter how much you cry
Why do you grit, when you want them to understand your secter?
An amazing feel all throughout this poem... strangely, I came to think of D4T video. But that is probably completely random, 4.04 talk by me.
ReplyDelete"You don´t spend your nights laughing
Why you should hide something
When everyone can see it anyway"
I love the laughing line... it really hits me. So moving. All of this is moving. You're so deep and write so damn well :) It's a joy to read. :)
I agree with Becca about the laughing line :P It's sort of... pure and stained at the same time (that was a compliment, don't get me wrong).
ReplyDeleteTho I never thought about D4T when reading this xD
And you managed to capture the tense and bring the poem into a whole another level with the last line... Great :D
becca, I can understand why you thought about D4T, there´s some thing that seem pretty simular :D like FR, I didn´t think about that at all! I hope your joy lasts.
ReplyDeleteand I love you guys <3