I´m building a fairytale world
World where I can be happy too
Where tears don´t hurt
where sorrow is beautiful
I´m building a world
a palace for me
World, where wings carry over the sky
I´m building a world
Consummated from wishes
Grown from dreams
Rejoined with hope
Where dead people get their serenity
For people who suffocated into their pain
I give everlasting sleep
For drowned light air to breath
For burned sprinkles on hair
I´m building a fairytale world
Where love end when it needs to
But never to wrong words
where it snows from clear sky
I´m building dreams
Where I can live in and where I can be forgotten
Where I can lose the truth
Dreams which are week enough to last
I´m building a fairytale world
World where sleeplesses look at sunrise
World where is always full moon
I´m building it
I make a fairytale world
Where I´ll leave myself
I´ll leave myself to grow ready for this world
Where walls fall and bury you into darkness
"World where sorrow is beautiful"
ReplyDeleteAs you already know... this is my very, very favorite of all you've written that I've laid eyes on. You were in awe over how I could write in rhyme, I'm in awe over how you don't; and still manage that vivid language, that wonderful imagery. The whole last stanza has got me completely :o :o I couldn't write something like that in a million fucking years.
Damn, your poetry hits me like a brick every time.
"World where I can be happy too"
ReplyDeleteI go completely with Becc, in this case.. Even if you dont rhyme, you choose beautiful words to enhance your poetry with such brilliance that it can have a really deep impact on the reader! I really loved the first stanza... the whole poem's a work of a genious!
Well done!! :)
Bec, I hope you don´t get hurt! :D
ReplyDeleterhymes.. If you can write them it´s wonderful, if you can´t you have to find another way.. there was time when I thought that poems without rhymes aren´t poems at all but now all I write is "rhymefree" :D
Poems are just words with feeling ;) structure and stuff is just a layer of it!
ReplyDeleteHahahah I'm not hurt yet but please, don't stop hitting me :o xD