Saturday, April 25, 2009

Within your head sleeping

Slightly snoring you slept beside me
More in this moment than awake
You never woke up to this place
You slept within your head, safe

I guess your parents didn´t remember
That you shouldn´t built human only with dreams

Once you woke up and couldn´t open your eyes
Pieces separated from your heart and got lost
You should have slept
Within your head

3 comments:

  1. "Once you woke up and couldn´t open your eyes
    Pieces separated from your heart and got lost
    You should have slept
    Within your head"

    I think this is a very beautiful stanza, one of the best I've read in quite a while. <3

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  2. "Slightly snoring you slept beside me
    More in this moment than awake
    You never woke up to this place
    You slept within your head, safe"

    BEAUTIFUL !!! :D

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