I fell into the water and you came
I fell twice and you came to save me
I fell again and you came
I fell, fell, fell
You came, came, came
Once you droped me into the water
To make me survive
But I was too scared and so you came again
And I didn´t learn how to swim
holy mother of gawd!!!!! :O
ReplyDeletethe thought in this poem is soooo simply out-standing!!!!!! you have no idea how speechless i am right now... this was soo great!
infact , one of the best pieces i have read in a long time.!! simple , and BEAUTIFUL a thought to be captured in words..
AWESOME JOB !! \m/
and still it´s so simple.. I thought that it´s way to simple :D cool ^^
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