Everyone can win
But good losers are very rare
Can´t we just give up
When backing up would be better than going on
We wouldn´t destroy anything else but our pride
Behind us long time and many tries
Fustration and anger are huge
Is it easier to grip your hands into fists constantly
Than let go?
We could be so much better
We used to be so thrilled
"Can´t we just give up
ReplyDeleteWhen backing up would be better than going on"
Not bad at all! And to be honest, the ending left me quite confused... :P
is it the "thrilled" or what? to be honest (I don´t lie, anyway), I chose that word because it sounded nice XD and because I felt like it could be there. but anyway... :P
ReplyDeleteI'm not saying it doesn't sound good or anything; actually I'm glad you chose that word, it makes the ending mysterious.
ReplyDeleteThe again, maybe you didn't mean it to be mysterious... I just spotted the minor irrationality of the word "thrilled" cos it might refer to the line "Behind us long time and many tries" and that line might not always mean something positive alone... (mysterious, see? ;D)
But, it's in your head, you know the answers xD
there´s no answer ^^ all blank
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