Wednesday, April 15, 2009

Prison without locks

You don´t need locks to make a prison
Only prisoners
One can be enough
You knew it too
That´s how you built this
Hostage in your own mind

You rarely need a judge to judge
So you built these bars
You placed your verdict and a guard
Gaze attached on something eyes can´t see

Are you going to reimburse of good behavior
And shorten your verdict?
There´s no lock in the door
Please come out

4 comments:

  1. "Gaze attached on something eyes can´t see"

    May I quote that line in the sidebar of my blog?

    "There´s no lock in the door
    Please come out"

    Ha, I love the idea of a prison with no locks! Like a prison in one's mind... "Hostage in your own mind" as you said ;)
    (and I'm a huge fan of Prison Break...) xD

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  2. oh o.O that would be a huge honor to me! so yes, yes and yes :D
    (I don´t like Prison Break, too rough :D makes me scared >.<)

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  3. Veeeery interesting.

    "You don´t need locks to make a prison
    Only prisoners
    One can be enough
    You knew it too"

    I love this idea :o It's insane really. It's one of those POTF lines that just hit you and you knew you were always thinking it, but you needed someone to write it down with words. You prove again why I love your poetry so. I'm very very fond of this one.

    (And no I'm not just saying :P )

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  4. awwww... from POTF? Maybe I´m not their big fan enough to recognize that one.

    (I know ;)

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