One moment more I´ll stay awake by you
Then I give up and fall asleep
I´m tired wondering your life
Hours been wasted
You lie stiff, like a corpse
Almost not breathing
Your life goes little by little
You´re afraid of losing it
But don´t have the nerve to live it
I think they have forgotten you
Slowly you get buried under the snow
As quiet as your heart
If you had reached in time
Maybe you wouldn´t be here, slowly dying
I see so much of me in this one :o It's like you wrote it about me? :D
ReplyDeleteI can't even quote the best lines... I think this hit like a brick really... and time after time you prove what a great poet you are. I love the way you switch from "I" to "you" in the first part of it. This really made me think, it's a really great piece, I don't know how you're able to write so timelessly.
You really inspire me :*
"Your life goes little by little
ReplyDeleteYou´re afraid of losing it
But don´t have the nerve to live it"
Extremely good!! :D Keep 'em up!
Bex: maybe I write ;) maybe I am a spy :DD I can´t tell how I write timelessly, it just comes ;)and biggest compliment for me is to say "you inspire me", it really.. means a lot to me. thank you, dear <3
ReplyDeleteRoosa: I will try, I will try ^^ thank you!