Monday, July 6, 2009

Jamjar

I don´t identify myself
First I lost my toes, thn feelings
I don´t know do I love anyone
Everyone around me is dying
Maybe it´s better this way

My heart is raging in a jamjar
It´s pounding the walls and sreaming quietly
The death struggle is entertaining

And that jamjar swings and cracks, but it won´t break
Despair frosts the jar
But it won´t break

Poet in the Jar... Heart in the Jar <3

4 comments:

  1. "And that jamjar swings and cracks, but it won´t break
    Despair frosts the jar
    But it won´t break"

    Is this really dedicated to Becc? cos If it is, then these lines fit just perfect! ^^

    those lines are pure genious!

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  2. It´s not exactly to Bex, but I thought her a lot when I was writing it :)

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  3. Wow, all the same that's an immense honor :O

    It's a really good piece, especially the lines that Ayan quoted before me. ^^ I was happy to find myself in the bottom of it ;)

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